Feedback on my new character

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Argentin

Market Level 5Community Level 8
1685 posts

I'm trying to come up with a new character for my game, so I've made a couple of concepts for it.

You can see the concept progress I made, and how I got to a version I feel works pretty well.

However, I still think there's room for improvement, I just can't see it!

So I'd love to hear your feedback and opinions on what I could improve, or what works already 

And this is a quick mockup of Mr Sheeple under a powerup effect:

https://youtu.be/gEgDQiyNzDs

posted 2016-03-24T06:32:10-07:00
ggames59

Market Level 0Community Level 1
54 posts

second one look better i think

posted 2016-03-24T19:49:54-07:00
Blackizzy

Market Level 1Community Level 5
424 posts

 I also prefer version 2, its more simple and straightforward. It took me a while to distinguish limbs on the last one, and the earing make it a bit overcharged. I understand that the second one has no color and only tint of white and black ( a bit of yellow but not very visible), so maybe i would keep the tongue idea+color or make something like a nice neck tie the same color instead if it does'nt fit well.

posted 2016-03-24T21:57:48-07:00
Argentin

Market Level 5Community Level 8
1685 posts

On Mar 24, 2016, Blackizzy said:

 I also prefer version 2, its more simple and straightforward. It took me a while to distinguish limbs on the last one, and the earing make it a bit overcharged. I understand that the second one has no color and only tint of white and black ( a bit of yellow but not very visible), so maybe i would keep the tongue idea+color or make something like a nice neck tie the same color instead if it does'nt fit well.

Thanks man, I'll try to work with some of your suggestions

posted 2016-03-25T08:28:11-07:00
Iskander Aminov

Market Level 5Community Level 3
242 posts

4, 2, 1, 5, 3

posted 2016-03-25T21:06:55-07:00
PhoenixBolt Studios

Market Level 0Community Level 0
2 posts

i like the art in this series 2,5,1,3,4, but actually all of them looks great.

posted 2016-06-02T15:53:42-07:00