Feedback on In-Game Art

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So I am working on a side scroller right now, and I was just wondering if there are any changes or tweaks I could make to either the "platform" or "hero" to improve them overall.

If there is anything, even the slightest color issue please tell me.

Hero & Platform

Thank You.

posted 2012-01-28T20:36:11-08:00

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Looks great!

posted 2012-01-29T07:34:34-08:00

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I'd change it' facial expression

Doesn't look to expressive as it is.It's too bland in my opinion.

Other than that' everything looks ok

posted 2012-01-29T12:11:58-08:00

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I really like it.

The grass color palette is ok, but you should try going from lighter to darker. In my opinion the darkest green is too dark, but that's just a matter of taste.

Nice job and I would love to see it animated once it's done. Good luck!

posted 2012-01-29T12:42:32-08:00

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looks good, maybe the pants could be a little less dark.   But thecolors do look nice.

posted 2012-01-30T21:46:36-08:00

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Just a suggestion (not sure if it would look better or not, it actually depends on what background you use in-game), but maybe try some kind of outline around the character(s).  As it stands now, because of the colors (and again, depending on the background) everything sort of "blends" together a little.

But overall I like it, the grass especially.

posted 2012-02-01T16:10:54-08:00

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the style is ok, but i would like you to consider what you want to emphasize. cuz thats really important.. I personally like to use color as 1 of my method to emphasize. cuz right now everything is too bright & the color r high saturated. if u want to emphasize the character, u might want to desaturate the color of the platform, especially the grass..

thats all i can think bout right now. sry for my bad english and good luck. :)

posted 2012-02-01T20:12:19-08:00

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Looks nice!

posted 2012-07-17T17:45:47-07:00